Cohesion in Academic Writing: A Comparison of Essays in English Written by LI and L2 University Students

Cohesion plays an important role in ensuring clarity, appropriateness, and comprehensibility in text. This study compares L1-Chinese and L1-English university students' use of cohesion in English essays and examines the cohesive features in academic writing of L2 students from three perspective...

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Published in:Theory and practice in language studies 2020-07, Vol.10 (7), p.761
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